I tried making a song

[lame_username]

Hello, I tried making a song, please suggest some improvements. Also can someone suggest some nice noise bands?
The track:

[Soloman Tump]

If you added some female screamy vocals you have yourself the new release by Melt Banana.

bounce

[RUBBISH]

Noise bands means to me a noise project with more than 2 people but this is just somepersonal Noise rule of mine I use to mentally categorize things.


Throbbing Gristle would be a good noise band to start with.
Wolf Eyes is totally a Noise band.
Einstxc3xbcrzende Neubautens early material is great noise band material...classic must hear.

Merzbow is not a noise 'band' but is totally noise and good place to start.
Now where to start listening to Merzbow is a whole different topic.


Start with those maybe.


I'd replace the drums with smashing metal or broken glass.
I agree adding some screaming male or female vocals or both at once would be cool.

[FAP]

Now where to start listening to Merzbow is a whole different topic.

[NoiseWiki]

Now where to start listening to Merzbow is a whole different topic.

Went ahead and added that to the Merzbow page which remains sparse!

https://www.noisewiki.com/wiki/index.php?title=Merzbow

[lame_username]

Thanks for the replies everyone!